Thursday, 26 June 2014

warriors
THANK YOU WARRIORS & KIDS CAN!!!☺
Hi my name is Jolene I’m in room 6 but I didn’t get any because there was no more but this isn’t my jacket it is my friends but I’m getting it sincerely soon I bet you that it will be the bestest most, comfortablest, warmest jacket that I have ever had so I’d like to Thank you so much again for this Warriors & Kids Can. Thank You a Bunch!!!☺

Monday, 23 June 2014

My speech

MY SPEECH
Purpose: To convince/ persuade my audience.
Topic: Why we need 2 day weekends.

Six days away from my family that is just too much. Hi my name is Jolene and I think that my teacher is crazy. I got things to do man. That is why I’m here to convince you that we should still have two day weekends.


Firstly, I’m going to need some sleep in time because I’m growing fast, I play hard and work hard and I can’t focus when I’m tired and it won’t be much fun either.just playing with the same people every Saturday. So I need my Saturdays that's why I believe that we should still have two day weekends to remain.

Secondly, if I stayed away from school for two days then I will be able to spend time with my family so we can play, have fresh air, they won’t be able to watch us, I might miss out on what they do, I will miss them and I could be able to help mum look after the baby (family time). Therefore I love having fun, that's why I truly deeply believe that there should be two days weekend

Thirdly, I need time to play with other people like my friends because when I see them shopping at New world or Countdown I don’t spend much time with them. On Sunday I have to do chores and when I have free time my mum is always wanting me and if I come to school on Saturday then I’ll just be playing with the same people. So that's why I deeply believe that we still need 2 day weekends.

In conclusion I have stated three great reasons from myself why we need 2 day weekends,
1. I need sleep in time to focus,
2. I need family time so I don’t miss out on the things that they do
and
3. I need to play with other people like my friends so I could refresh my mind and you learn lots from playing.

So I’m Jolene Komene and I’d like to like thank you very much from the bottom of my heart for listening to my speech.


Friday, 6 June 2014

My recount-a time i was successful

Recount: A time I was successful.

WALT: Retell of a past experience.

WILF: Audience has all the information needed.

When I scored a try

The whistle blow Kiana was holding the ball she yelled "here grab the ball" to me but I didn't even know were the try-line was. I was worried if I would let them down but only if Kiana passed it to me. Everyone screamed "pass Kiana pass".

As Kiana was yelling to me "here grab the ball" I was looking at the other team, they were getting closer so Kiana just toast the ball to me. I had the ball in my hand I asked Kiana were is the try-line she uttered at me "just run as fast as you can down to those two flags". I took a few breaths.

Next I boosted it towards the try-line everyone from KWS ripper team were yelling at me like a lion saying "boost it keep running " I had a little smile. People from the other team were heading towards me like a rino one of them almost ripped my tag, but lucky he was off side the ref blurted out "Keep running he is off side " I sprinted to the try-line.

Then Kiana yelled " hear pass it to me" I replied " no I'm almost there " she quickly replied back "then run" as she slowed down I boosted it straight up, everyone yelled at the same time "put it down" I slammed  it down to the fresh, wet grass the whistle blow I had scored a try. I had a big as smile.

Finally it was the end what a big try, I can't believe  that scored one.I gave everyone an hi-five I was proud of my-self.